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i think it's kind of absurd how i need to include an abundance of metaphors and a countless number of similes included in any of my writings for people to think it's good and for me to feel okay with what i created i have to clean and polish every stanza every line every thought for me to even consider it to be presentable but not anymore if i feel something that's angering me or tearing up my insides to shreds or even something that's filling up my body with warmth i'm just gonna write because i can because i want to because i feel it. my grandma used to always tell me that finding the unrefined beauty in yourself is important and cherishing it was even more so. maybe i need to do the same with my writings
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Feb 2, 2015
Feb 2, 2015 at 11:23 PM UTC
unrefined beauty
i think it's kind of absurd how i need to include an abundance of metaphors and a countless number of similes included in any of my writings for people to think it's good and for me to feel okay with what i created i have to clean and polish every stanza every line every thought for me to even consider it to be presentable but not anymore if i feel something that's angering me or tearing up my insides to shreds or even something that's filling up my body with warmth i'm just gonna write because i can because i want to because i feel it. my grandma used to always tell me that finding the unrefined beauty in yourself is important and cherishing it was even more so. maybe i need to do the same with my writings
a-beautiful-tragdy
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Feb 2, 2015
Feb 2, 2015 at 11:23 PM UTC
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