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Oh,' be young or old, courageous or wise, Whatever you do, whoever you are, Beware of those souls whose words are the guise Hiding a past marked with an ugly scar. Their face may be benign hiding malus With an altruistic front for a show; Fragrance of a rose hides a soul callus Envious heart wanting to take your glow. Yet, your love and honesty guides your fate No matter what others would say and do, Love's the beacon to steer away from hate Enjoy life and show the world the real you. When deceptive people spin their charmed lies Let not their words fool you, learn to be wise.
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Feb 2, 2015
Feb 2, 2015 at 8:52 AM UTC
Sonnet II (Collab with Blythe)
Oh,' be young or old, courageous or wise, Whatever you do, whoever you are, Beware of those souls whose words are the guise Hiding a past marked with an ugly scar. Their face may be benign hiding malus With an altruistic front for a show; Fragrance of a rose hides a soul callus Envious heart wanting to take your glow. Yet, your love and honesty guides your fate No matter what others would say and do, Love's the beacon to steer away from hate Enjoy life and show the world the real you. When deceptive people spin their charmed lies Let not their words fool you, learn to be wise.
Blythe is my adopted daughter on HP:) we have been learning from each other, since we joined HP. It was a pleasure writing a Shakespeaean Sonnet with her. I wrote, the first line and every other line. I'm happy with the way this evolved.
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Feb 2, 2015
Feb 2, 2015 at 8:52 AM UTC
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