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Sometimes on the way out of Giant, I'll spend some time freeing change from the receipt-paper bindle in my coat pocket for one two-twist mystery prize from a Folz machine. Two quarters: Enough for a sapphire ring and a cheap laugh while I juggle coffee-cream cartons, a sack of December oranges, Certs, cinnamon mouthwash, a dented can of green beans 'cause it's cheaper, red toothpicks, Ziploc bags, a barbecue chicken TV dinner, Noxzema, a 32-case of Poland Spring water, a Valentine's Hallmark card and envelope, a bottle of pink grapefruit Perrier, two quick picks for Cash 5, gluten-free potato chips, garlic salt, some cumin for $2.82, and a copy of Vogue. I strap my groceries in the passenger seat, and see them sitting straight up as I had, childishly marveling at the lush maple leaves washing the windshield edges in green, leaving helicopters and dew trails. She and I watched slug trails beneath mustard streetlights glisten like Berger Lake. Bright as the last cigarette my grandma snuffed out in a smokeless ash tray. Bright as the first line of road flares that separated me from a burning Taurus. Bright as the quarter my grandpa gave me for the Folz machine in the Sylvania. And bright as the emerald ring I showed him.
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Feb 1, 2015
Feb 1, 2015 at 3:27 PM UTC
Plastic
Sometimes on the way out of Giant, I'll spend some time freeing change from the receipt-paper bindle in my coat pocket for one two-twist mystery prize from a Folz machine. Two quarters: Enough for a sapphire ring and a cheap laugh while I juggle coffee-cream cartons, a sack of December oranges, Certs, cinnamon mouthwash, a dented can of green beans 'cause it's cheaper, red toothpicks, Ziploc bags, a barbecue chicken TV dinner, Noxzema, a 32-case of Poland Spring water, a Valentine's Hallmark card and envelope, a bottle of pink grapefruit Perrier, two quick picks for Cash 5, gluten-free potato chips, garlic salt, some cumin for $2.82, and a copy of Vogue. I strap my groceries in the passenger seat, and see them sitting straight up as I had, childishly marveling at the lush maple leaves washing the windshield edges in green, leaving helicopters and dew trails. She and I watched slug trails beneath mustard streetlights glisten like Berger Lake. Bright as the last cigarette my grandma snuffed out in a smokeless ash tray. Bright as the first line of road flares that separated me from a burning Taurus. Bright as the quarter my grandpa gave me for the Folz machine in the Sylvania. And bright as the emerald ring I showed him.
This is an expanded, workshopped version of "A Plastic Ring" that I like a lot more than the original.
christopher-cizek
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Feb 1, 2015
Feb 1, 2015 at 3:27 PM UTC
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