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caught up in a sa of altrd imags alcohol flowing    rd pupils from all th slfis    **** scroll up /// scroll down m8 u waz wastd    vryon at ach othr voics scrambl;ing for pol position #popularity laddr a flck of jalousy    slic of malic    *fyi grn lights signal sombody cars rite?? hr bgins th dz-dss-    the dscnt into pixls primary colours    'oMG xx' night grows old    plot unravls lik a ball of string coagulats thick and bad let fingrs do the talkin' 4 u   nams bcom strangrs bcom nams bcom strangrs TTYL :)
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Jan 29, 2015
Jan 29, 2015 at 6:09 PM UTC
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caught up in a sa of altrd imags alcohol flowing    rd pupils from all th slfis    **** scroll up /// scroll down m8 u waz wastd    vryon at ach othr voics scrambl;ing for pol position #popularity laddr a flck of jalousy    slic of malic    *fyi grn lights signal sombody cars rite?? hr bgins th dz-dss-    the dscnt into pixls primary colours    'oMG xx' night grows old    plot unravls lik a ball of string coagulats thick and bad let fingrs do the talkin' 4 u   nams bcom strangrs bcom nams bcom strangrs TTYL :)
Written: January 2015. Explanation: A poem written in my own time. I have just finished watching a recent powerful UK TV film called 'Cyberbully', which highlights how an unknown culprit can attack others through the Internet. This got me thinking about how today's society is so Internet-based, it's quite shocking. I notice everyday how people can be rude or offensive to others online, and yet nobody thinks anything of it, and as a result, nothing is done. The culture of those aged between 15-22 online is a thorny topic - selfies galore, attention-seekers, terrible spellers - not all, but a lot. This poem deliberately omits any use of the letter 'e', contains brief 'cyberspeak' and punctuation in an unorthodox style (but the sort of thing one may see online from time to time). Feedback as always is appreciated.
reece-aj-chambers
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Jan 29, 2015
Jan 29, 2015 at 6:09 PM UTC
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