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I woke this day greeted by sun: warm, brilliant, present ray lashed out from mighty orb, travelling far to find my eye, yet meek - patient until paid more heed than dreams but though the dawn was blonde, and radiance brushed my skin, still it paled
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Apr 14, 2011
Apr 14, 2011 at 6:28 AM UTC
The sun, in comparison
I woke this day greeted by sun: warm, brilliant, present ray lashed out from mighty orb, travelling far to find my eye, yet meek - patient until paid more heed than dreams but though the dawn was blonde, and radiance brushed my skin, still it paled
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Apr 14, 2011
Apr 14, 2011 at 6:28 AM UTC
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