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Whim Carefree Within me Ideas abound Feed and make me happy No structure in my head they pound Searching for the one idea that’s profound Capture thoughts as they spiral around unknowing Like alphabet soup swirling all around Rhyming and rhythm they can sound Ideas can not foresee Thoughts will surround Keeps me free Simply Vim
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Jan 25, 2015
Jan 25, 2015 at 7:25 PM UTC
Whim
Whim Carefree Within me Ideas abound Feed and make me happy No structure in my head they pound Searching for the one idea that’s profound Capture thoughts as they spiral around unknowing Like alphabet soup swirling all around Rhyming and rhythm they can sound Ideas can not foresee Thoughts will surround Keeps me free Simply Vim
My attempt at a Diatelle
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Brisbane
Jan 25, 2015
Jan 25, 2015 at 7:25 PM UTC
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