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I have been meaning to write you a letter but I cannot find the right words I tried to begin with hello But it simply felt to sudden I tried dear, but dear who? "Well, here goes, Dear Mr. love of my life" Yeah that was try number 100 and it gets worse after try number 1000 "estimated Mr. ..." "hi" "Good day" "I am" meee How to I tell you what I feel where do I start, what words to use to show the importance of my letter What words to use to show the love and need I have for you "Dear you, " but then what next "sincerely, me"? I love you Yes that is the beginning "I love you" I love you "That phrase is a little overused, simply because it is the easiest way to express a feeling, a thought, a part of life" Ok, there it is. Once the first words are on the paper the rest come as if following the leader.. "I bet it got your attention. I love you! I love you" But I love you is used tooo often "I cannot let the words I Love You do the work alone I love you with all my heart all my soul all my life!!! All of my dreams are shared with you All my fears are murdered by you All of my future, has you in it" Yup, there it goes. the words on the letter the letter to my one love my one love will forever be with me "I know there are others, I know I am not the only one but I prefer not to think about it, I know you love me, I know I am yours" "I LOVE YOU" "but only because you loved me first, only because you saw me first only because you held my hand and led me through the darkness and into the brightest light of your presence" Oh how amazing your presence was State the purpose: "I write this letter to extend my admiration, to thank-you for the times we have spend together, to ask for your forgiveness when I wronged you, to reach out to you as the only one, the only one I could ever love and be loved my truly. " State a reason, claim or preference: " I want you too..." NO "I need you too never let me go, to fight by my side, to never give you back to me, to fight my pride, my anger, my hate, to never make me forget who you are to fight for us to be together always" "I need you, I must have you, I cannot see myself, living without you I cannot imagine a life without you I cannot find a path if you do not lead" "I was lost, and now I am found." "I was alone, and know I have you" "I knew not love, and know I know you, The way The truth and The life" "I want nothing else but to be with you I want nothing else but to love you I want nothing else but I forever fight for you!" "Lord, oh God, Savior, oh powerful lamb take my hand, and take me through the pain through the tears, through the rain through the fears I will walk beside you all the way to heaven" "I love you" "These words are overused, that it why I say *I will love you, until the earth is no longer round Until the sun looses its light, until we are the only two in the entire universe until the universe is gone Until light no longer shines with you until I die, live again, and die again! I will love you, until the way I can no longer feel no more! Until I am dry and no longer be able to be alive!!! The way you have love me first!*"
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Jan 23, 2015
Jan 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM UTC
Letter
I have been meaning to write you a letter but I cannot find the right words I tried to begin with hello But it simply felt to sudden I tried dear, but dear who? "Well, here goes, Dear Mr. love of my life" Yeah that was try number 100 and it gets worse after try number 1000 "estimated Mr. ..." "hi" "Good day" "I am" meee How to I tell you what I feel where do I start, what words to use to show the importance of my letter What words to use to show the love and need I have for you "Dear you, " but then what next "sincerely, me"? I love you Yes that is the beginning "I love you" I love you "That phrase is a little overused, simply because it is the easiest way to express a feeling, a thought, a part of life" Ok, there it is. Once the first words are on the paper the rest come as if following the leader.. "I bet it got your attention. I love you! I love you" But I love you is used tooo often "I cannot let the words I Love You do the work alone I love you with all my heart all my soul all my life!!! All of my dreams are shared with you All my fears are murdered by you All of my future, has you in it" Yup, there it goes. the words on the letter the letter to my one love my one love will forever be with me "I know there are others, I know I am not the only one but I prefer not to think about it, I know you love me, I know I am yours" "I LOVE YOU" "but only because you loved me first, only because you saw me first only because you held my hand and led me through the darkness and into the brightest light of your presence" Oh how amazing your presence was State the purpose: "I write this letter to extend my admiration, to thank-you for the times we have spend together, to ask for your forgiveness when I wronged you, to reach out to you as the only one, the only one I could ever love and be loved my truly. " State a reason, claim or preference: " I want you too..." NO "I need you too never let me go, to fight by my side, to never give you back to me, to fight my pride, my anger, my hate, to never make me forget who you are to fight for us to be together always" "I need you, I must have you, I cannot see myself, living without you I cannot imagine a life without you I cannot find a path if you do not lead" "I was lost, and now I am found." "I was alone, and know I have you" "I knew not love, and know I know you, The way The truth and The life" "I want nothing else but to be with you I want nothing else but to love you I want nothing else but I forever fight for you!" "Lord, oh God, Savior, oh powerful lamb take my hand, and take me through the pain through the tears, through the rain through the fears I will walk beside you all the way to heaven" "I love you" "These words are overused, that it why I say *I will love you, until the earth is no longer round Until the sun looses its light, until we are the only two in the entire universe until the universe is gone Until light no longer shines with you until I die, live again, and die again! I will love you, until the way I can no longer feel no more! Until I am dry and no longer be able to be alive!!! The way you have love me first!*"
The-Voice
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Jan 23, 2015
Jan 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM UTC
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