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Holding my breath, I'm floating up, up, and awaay darkness beneath me I break the surface and take a deep breath of sunshine as I wake up and rise up and then i've got some time to exist in peace. before I start focusing before i start noticing... before i start getting caught getting caught in the thickets caught in the thicket thoughts thicket thoughts thickets so now I'm trying to savor that blurry time 'cause I like to walk that blurry line between sleeping n' leaping from keep to keep because life is just one blurry line ... between sleeps ________ I pour a line of salt onto a table and it's dissipating around the edges and you can see the surface beneath it that rises up like a mountain range and I'm rising out of the ocean like a ******* performing an interdimensional ion exchange and I'm a surface rising out of a sea of salt and I am an ocean rising out of an ocean rising out of a surface of a surface... waking up, up and away
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Jan 22, 2015
Jan 22, 2015 at 10:48 AM UTC
up, up and away
Holding my breath, I'm floating up, up, and awaay darkness beneath me I break the surface and take a deep breath of sunshine as I wake up and rise up and then i've got some time to exist in peace. before I start focusing before i start noticing... before i start getting caught getting caught in the thickets caught in the thicket thoughts thicket thoughts thickets so now I'm trying to savor that blurry time 'cause I like to walk that blurry line between sleeping n' leaping from keep to keep because life is just one blurry line ... between sleeps ________ I pour a line of salt onto a table and it's dissipating around the edges and you can see the surface beneath it that rises up like a mountain range and I'm rising out of the ocean like a ******* performing an interdimensional ion exchange and I'm a surface rising out of a sea of salt and I am an ocean rising out of an ocean rising out of a surface of a surface... waking up, up and away
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Jan 22, 2015
Jan 22, 2015 at 10:48 AM UTC
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