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For what reason should I give a **** Should I tell you what has been on my mind For what reason should I listen to you When you ignore everything I say You play this game that manipulates my life Then want to get mad at me when my life finally crumbles When I finally become depressed because my mind can't handle the torture For what reason do you pretend to give two ***** about me You make me sick and tired of being alive Because every thought in my head is that of you telling me I can't And I know can't but I still try to thrive Only to dive six feet deeper into the solid ground I've gone so far down now that I can feel the firey pitts of hell burn my *** to ashes And it hurts but I cannot cry because I still fear what you think of me So I pretend not to give a **** when a **** is all I have to give Because the ***** been burned long before I got to this point So I laugh knowing that the blood of ******** would spued out my mouth But just like everything else you ignore that as well And it enrages me until the point the light in my life ceased to exist So I end up sitting alone in another lonely night Can't you open your eyes for not five second Just see my true sorrow that I don't even hide Hear my cries of me begging please notice please notice Please notice me I beg thee I've become so weak I crawl instead of walking I'm too tired to eat,Too hungry to sleep I just don't know what to do anymore Yet there you are turning your back to as you always have So why should I give a **** anymore Though everything is on my mind Why should I listen these days When these days are the ones that have finally broken me I don't care anymore I can't care anymore I'm done for Goodbye world
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Jan 19, 2015
Jan 19, 2015 at 12:06 PM UTC
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For what reason should I give a **** Should I tell you what has been on my mind For what reason should I listen to you When you ignore everything I say You play this game that manipulates my life Then want to get mad at me when my life finally crumbles When I finally become depressed because my mind can't handle the torture For what reason do you pretend to give two ***** about me You make me sick and tired of being alive Because every thought in my head is that of you telling me I can't And I know can't but I still try to thrive Only to dive six feet deeper into the solid ground I've gone so far down now that I can feel the firey pitts of hell burn my *** to ashes And it hurts but I cannot cry because I still fear what you think of me So I pretend not to give a **** when a **** is all I have to give Because the ***** been burned long before I got to this point So I laugh knowing that the blood of ******** would spued out my mouth But just like everything else you ignore that as well And it enrages me until the point the light in my life ceased to exist So I end up sitting alone in another lonely night Can't you open your eyes for not five second Just see my true sorrow that I don't even hide Hear my cries of me begging please notice please notice Please notice me I beg thee I've become so weak I crawl instead of walking I'm too tired to eat,Too hungry to sleep I just don't know what to do anymore Yet there you are turning your back to as you always have So why should I give a **** anymore Though everything is on my mind Why should I listen these days When these days are the ones that have finally broken me I don't care anymore I can't care anymore I'm done for Goodbye world
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Jan 19, 2015
Jan 19, 2015 at 12:06 PM UTC
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