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It was a magical moment As my niece's boyfriend Approached her the day after Her birthday We were all sitting around Just talking about the night before When he came into my view With a bunch of roses in one hand And small gifted bag in the other The surprised look on her face was priceless Her family knew before her aunties of course She was clueless to this unexpected surprise It brought tears to my eyes as I watched Her young men bend, on bended knees And proposed to her in front of her family It was the look on her face that was so priceless First surprise, then a glow just radiated from her soul She looked so beautiful to mine eyes She said yes to this special young man I had not noticed that his brother was sitting next to him All I could see was the glow that was there in my nieces face What a beautiful sight to see I bare witness to first true love I felt so honored to be a part of this special event And so proud of my niece as she said yes for ever more then not more than 5 minutes later my brother called...what a wonderful way to find out his niece was now engaged...she was gushing surprised and overwhelmed...shes so happy now I smile and nod my head yes he is a special young man that captured my nieces heart Congratulations My Dear Love always Aunty Kaila
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Jan 18, 2015
Jan 18, 2015 at 6:30 PM UTC
She Said Yes
It was a magical moment As my niece's boyfriend Approached her the day after Her birthday We were all sitting around Just talking about the night before When he came into my view With a bunch of roses in one hand And small gifted bag in the other The surprised look on her face was priceless Her family knew before her aunties of course She was clueless to this unexpected surprise It brought tears to my eyes as I watched Her young men bend, on bended knees And proposed to her in front of her family It was the look on her face that was so priceless First surprise, then a glow just radiated from her soul She looked so beautiful to mine eyes She said yes to this special young man I had not noticed that his brother was sitting next to him All I could see was the glow that was there in my nieces face What a beautiful sight to see I bare witness to first true love I felt so honored to be a part of this special event And so proud of my niece as she said yes for ever more then not more than 5 minutes later my brother called...what a wonderful way to find out his niece was now engaged...she was gushing surprised and overwhelmed...shes so happy now I smile and nod my head yes he is a special young man that captured my nieces heart Congratulations My Dear Love always Aunty Kaila
kaila-george
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Jan 18, 2015
Jan 18, 2015 at 6:30 PM UTC
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