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I once compared you to the shipping forecast A soothing distraction for an unsettled mind But this was not a low You were the one who left me drowning Threw me a lifebelt and a shark whistle And told me to save myself He was the one who never gave up the search Found me and hoisted me to dry land. I lost myself in you and can't get myself back My soul like so many pieces of driftwood Carried away on the waves All out at sea.
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Jan 18, 2015
Jan 18, 2015 at 9:58 AM UTC
All out at sea
I once compared you to the shipping forecast A soothing distraction for an unsettled mind But this was not a low You were the one who left me drowning Threw me a lifebelt and a shark whistle And told me to save myself He was the one who never gave up the search Found me and hoisted me to dry land. I lost myself in you and can't get myself back My soul like so many pieces of driftwood Carried away on the waves All out at sea.
Was listening to Blur's This Is A Low and thought about the someone who had let me down. Took the shipping forecast analogy from the song but this is the very opposite. He was a comforting campanion, like listening to the shipping forecast but when the storm hit he could not (or would not) help.
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Jan 18, 2015
Jan 18, 2015 at 9:58 AM UTC
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