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Your eyes, blue as the sky, soft as the clouds. A palette of shades layered like spiralled concentric circles. They overlap like waves softy crashing within the glittery sea. They draw me into the warm, comforting water. They're fun, and busy like summers and colours and timeless days where the present does not acknowledge the past or the future. Your eyes, fun as the sea, blue as the clear water, make me feel comfortable, safe and secure. As I soak in their freedom, I feel the rush of the sea spreading through my body, my heart, my soul, my feelings for you. Your eyes are as beautiful as the sea. But your eyes, deep as the ocean, dark and dangerous as its depth, they pick me apart and vandalise me. They scare me, hurt me, confuse me, and disgust me. I hate being picked apart by the whirlpools of your eyes. Stop them from spinning my emotions round, and round and round. They throw me into a wave of evil, plunging me to my shipwreck of a heart and watching me sink, all the way to my deepest of fears. Blink. The ocean washes over me and I float into a beautifully blue sea. The change of setting confuses me, because your eyes continue to control me still. I stare into your eyes, diving into the countless shades of blue, as I realise: The ocean is much more powerful than the sea.
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Jan 17, 2015
Jan 17, 2015 at 9:44 AM UTC
Your eyes
Your eyes, blue as the sky, soft as the clouds. A palette of shades layered like spiralled concentric circles. They overlap like waves softy crashing within the glittery sea. They draw me into the warm, comforting water. They're fun, and busy like summers and colours and timeless days where the present does not acknowledge the past or the future. Your eyes, fun as the sea, blue as the clear water, make me feel comfortable, safe and secure. As I soak in their freedom, I feel the rush of the sea spreading through my body, my heart, my soul, my feelings for you. Your eyes are as beautiful as the sea. But your eyes, deep as the ocean, dark and dangerous as its depth, they pick me apart and vandalise me. They scare me, hurt me, confuse me, and disgust me. I hate being picked apart by the whirlpools of your eyes. Stop them from spinning my emotions round, and round and round. They throw me into a wave of evil, plunging me to my shipwreck of a heart and watching me sink, all the way to my deepest of fears. Blink. The ocean washes over me and I float into a beautifully blue sea. The change of setting confuses me, because your eyes continue to control me still. I stare into your eyes, diving into the countless shades of blue, as I realise: The ocean is much more powerful than the sea.
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Egyptian
Jan 17, 2015
Jan 17, 2015 at 9:44 AM UTC
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