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12:05 am, drunk text, honest words fingers brush the send button message sent reads the screen, sweaty palms, backtracking hit delete, no use
 eyes close, deep breath message received 1:00 am, sober thoughts angry groan, swear words escape your lips, waiting, hoping, praying hit open, no use eyes close, deep sigh no reply 3:16 am, point of no return parallel realities flash by one good, one bad one yes, one no call him? no use eyes close, almost asleep one new text
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Jan 13, 2015
Jan 13, 2015 at 12:36 PM UTC
The Point of No Return
12:05 am, drunk text, honest words fingers brush the send button message sent reads the screen, sweaty palms, backtracking hit delete, no use
 eyes close, deep breath message received 1:00 am, sober thoughts angry groan, swear words escape your lips, waiting, hoping, praying hit open, no use eyes close, deep sigh no reply 3:16 am, point of no return parallel realities flash by one good, one bad one yes, one no call him? no use eyes close, almost asleep one new text
Yeah, I know it's probably not my best work, but the idea was on my mind for days. Hope you like it! I think it's more about the form of the poem.
#love#drunk#pain#sleep#time#lips#confusion#text
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Jan 13, 2015
Jan 13, 2015 at 12:36 PM UTC
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