To he whom feels the need to condemn,
rip apart and tear away.
To dissect another's written script
to cause with malice, words to fray.
I have these words too say too you,
wouldn't it be better in the end,
instead of shooting from the hip,
encouragement you could extend.
Make a point with others here.
The likes of me, 'who can't care less'
But no, you guys go for the ****
of those who's minds that you can mess.
I've read so many cold one liners,
composed to cause the worst heartbreak,
your words deliver contamination,
the likes of that most slimy snake.
If you have only half, the talent
that you really think of your esteem.
You wouldn't need to be so nasty,
so keep it right and keep it clean.
If you feel that you must comment,
an honourable thing that you could do,
then try to help instead of hinder.
Then we might think something of you.
Constructive critique is a good thing,
it helps another and yourself.
But if you seek to be the *******
then keep your thoughts up on the shelf.
If you want to help another
it doesn't do to laugh and scoff,
if this is the path you wish to travel,
my words to you my friend **** Off".
Jan 12, 2015
Jan 12, 2015 at 11:56 AM UTC
To he whom feels the need to condemn,
rip apart and tear away.
To dissect another's written script
to cause with malice, words to fray.
I have these words too say too you,
wouldn't it be better in the end,
instead of shooting from the hip,
encouragement you could extend.
Make a point with others here.
The likes of me, 'who can't care less'
But no, you guys go for the ****
of those who's minds that you can mess.
I've read so many cold one liners,
composed to cause the worst heartbreak,
your words deliver contamination,
the likes of that most slimy snake.
If you have only half, the talent
that you really think of your esteem.
You wouldn't need to be so nasty,
so keep it right and keep it clean.
If you feel that you must comment,
an honourable thing that you could do,
then try to help instead of hinder.
Then we might think something of you.
Constructive critique is a good thing,
it helps another and yourself.
But if you seek to be the *******
then keep your thoughts up on the shelf.
If you want to help another
it doesn't do to laugh and scoff,
if this is the path you wish to travel,
my words to you my friend **** Off".
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