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Every single mistake of mine, even the recurring ones, patiently you edit within and read as if it's fine, nothing has ever gone wrong. see! what your love incomparable has to me done, my poor, darling! in my writing, they see the grammar fully muddled, so many words I spell wrong. I see this, only when others, bitterly, loudly complain gentle soul, your'e forgiving, but the world isn't,vengeful it seems, don't you see the predators, prowling? Why don't you consider the truth, I am imperfect, want to be corrected why not help me change, tell me where I go wrong, urge I'll certainly adore you more for that.
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Jan 10, 2015
Jan 10, 2015 at 1:04 PM UTC
Look what your love to me does when wrongly placed
Every single mistake of mine, even the recurring ones, patiently you edit within and read as if it's fine, nothing has ever gone wrong. see! what your love incomparable has to me done, my poor, darling! in my writing, they see the grammar fully muddled, so many words I spell wrong. I see this, only when others, bitterly, loudly complain gentle soul, your'e forgiving, but the world isn't,vengeful it seems, don't you see the predators, prowling? Why don't you consider the truth, I am imperfect, want to be corrected why not help me change, tell me where I go wrong, urge I'll certainly adore you more for that.
Darling, don't turn a blind eye to my faults, out of love
#neglect#mistake#correct
k-balachandran
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k-balachandran
Indian
Jan 10, 2015
Jan 10, 2015 at 1:04 PM UTC
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