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I sit at a two-top by myself by the bar. I draw on the back of a bill with a cheap pen I found clicked in a foam cup upstairs. I draw flat cars, flat poles, flat humans. I give them swirl hair and no fists. They are all alike. The bartender comes over and tells me that the bar is closed. I hold my left hand up to him and draw the sky. I fill it with carbon pink stars and coffee nebulae. Saturn's rings are made of cornbread crumbs. I blow a straw paper comet across the galaxy.
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Jan 6, 2015
Jan 6, 2015 at 9:18 PM UTC
I Draw the Sky
I sit at a two-top by myself by the bar. I draw on the back of a bill with a cheap pen I found clicked in a foam cup upstairs. I draw flat cars, flat poles, flat humans. I give them swirl hair and no fists. They are all alike. The bartender comes over and tells me that the bar is closed. I hold my left hand up to him and draw the sky. I fill it with carbon pink stars and coffee nebulae. Saturn's rings are made of cornbread crumbs. I blow a straw paper comet across the galaxy.
I felt like my poems were becoming too much, syllable-wise, so I wrote this [mostly] mono-syllabic poem. I really dig it.
christopher-cizek
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Jan 6, 2015
Jan 6, 2015 at 9:18 PM UTC
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