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It could have been a pleasant Monday. We sat outdoors and ate our sandwiches. It was crisp October, and we were on a dig. Earlier, we had used the transit to measure teepee rings from the nomad Cree tribe that once lived and loved here. You'd found the marker stones. I'd found a stone tool. But now we sit having lunch in the tepid sun. I looked at you and saw a young man who swaggered with false confidence. You wore an army jacket,though we were just 16. Your hair was red, and a little curly. Your eyes melted me, -robin's egg blue. I looked at your hands still holding the paper and I saw between the freckles on your wrist a blue vein. Without ability to stop myself I touched you there. And then my mind whirled. For the first time- suddenly, I was in your blood, your heart, your mind! You were just as jolted as I was, and we have never been the same. 40 years later. We write on your birthday. You ask about my mother. Do you ever say my name?
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Mar 15, 2011
Mar 15, 2011 at 2:01 AM UTC
Reflections on Stone Pile Hill, Rimby Alberta, circa 1970 Archeological dig.
It could have been a pleasant Monday. We sat outdoors and ate our sandwiches. It was crisp October, and we were on a dig. Earlier, we had used the transit to measure teepee rings from the nomad Cree tribe that once lived and loved here. You'd found the marker stones. I'd found a stone tool. But now we sit having lunch in the tepid sun. I looked at you and saw a young man who swaggered with false confidence. You wore an army jacket,though we were just 16. Your hair was red, and a little curly. Your eyes melted me, -robin's egg blue. I looked at your hands still holding the paper and I saw between the freckles on your wrist a blue vein. Without ability to stop myself I touched you there. And then my mind whirled. For the first time- suddenly, I was in your blood, your heart, your mind! You were just as jolted as I was, and we have never been the same. 40 years later. We write on your birthday. You ask about my mother. Do you ever say my name?
Written March 15, 2011
deborah-birch
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67/F/Canadian
Mar 15, 2011
Mar 15, 2011 at 2:01 AM UTC
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