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brittle thoughts, in fragile times. brittle bones and stick and stones, leave marks upon the  mind. speak softly, to the broken heart speak gently, to the shattered mind, lest we leave, a generation, of maimed souls on the road behind. kindness becomes the creed ... each to another, for under each man's skin, beats the heart of brother. and ideology is just a thought... hard pressed, in overdrive... be not a drone think now, outside the hive... to the individual, that lives within. the one with little, brittle thoughts, residing, hiding, biding, to break, the soul and **** the hope. shatter the mind, find the rope, take the life and cause strife..... so speak softly, talk gently, create hope, nurture life become unity, in this and every life..... or brittle anger wins... like a vengeful voodoo master with a swag of pins...
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Jan 5, 2015
Jan 5, 2015 at 2:54 AM UTC
brittle(ellie's book poem challenge)
brittle thoughts, in fragile times. brittle bones and stick and stones, leave marks upon the  mind. speak softly, to the broken heart speak gently, to the shattered mind, lest we leave, a generation, of maimed souls on the road behind. kindness becomes the creed ... each to another, for under each man's skin, beats the heart of brother. and ideology is just a thought... hard pressed, in overdrive... be not a drone think now, outside the hive... to the individual, that lives within. the one with little, brittle thoughts, residing, hiding, biding, to break, the soul and **** the hope. shatter the mind, find the rope, take the life and cause strife..... so speak softly, talk gently, create hope, nurture life become unity, in this and every life..... or brittle anger wins... like a vengeful voodoo master with a swag of pins...
the word....was brittle i wrote a stream of conciousness style poem... and then went back and gave it punctuation marks ................................................ great challenge...ellie well done.
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Jan 5, 2015
Jan 5, 2015 at 2:54 AM UTC
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