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At first, Love is a Choice To act, Not in emotions, Nor perceived rewards, Done from duty as duty, Because we would be Loving. Love may mellow Over time, See traits worthy of surrender... Take root, Become reason of itself For pleasure, For staying true. We performed the ritual courtesies: Reiterated "Love yous," "Thank yous," Farewell prayers, Hugs, Waving good-bye, We hoped our window tint Hid relief shining in our eyes.... And then another farewell, A mother crippled, old, Bent low by time and widowed, Gentle now, and grateful For our shortest stays. This mellowed love we would desire When we have nearly lived our days. Smiling tears and long embrace, Juxtaposed these loves that end in sighs The differences in love's good-byes.
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Jan 30, 2015
Jan 30, 2015 at 4:48 PM UTC
Saying Our Good-byes: A Juxtaposition
At first, Love is a Choice To act, Not in emotions, Nor perceived rewards, Done from duty as duty, Because we would be Loving. Love may mellow Over time, See traits worthy of surrender... Take root, Become reason of itself For pleasure, For staying true. We performed the ritual courtesies: Reiterated "Love yous," "Thank yous," Farewell prayers, Hugs, Waving good-bye, We hoped our window tint Hid relief shining in our eyes.... And then another farewell, A mother crippled, old, Bent low by time and widowed, Gentle now, and grateful For our shortest stays. This mellowed love we would desire When we have nearly lived our days. Smiling tears and long embrace, Juxtaposed these loves that end in sighs The differences in love's good-byes.
juxtaposition of farewells between the two mothers
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Jan 30, 2015
Jan 30, 2015 at 4:48 PM UTC
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