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i "It's over, isn't it?" You ask, Unsure of what to do. Bask In the glory of forgetting a Fight, fulfilling what I would say, Night coming to take me away, For I cannot stay. Breakaway, nay, My mind will not sway. Play For the day I will say And pray that I must get Away. Away. Away. And never ask In what way I did bask. ii But the words are cut short.  iii And someone else will die tonight, This is simply the human plight. We do not control, or know, How we'll react to Death's scythe.* Running up from behind, poked sides? Charging headlong, blind, and teeth bright? Or a chase, running shorts chafing? But I have not finished wri- iv The fever is the cure, no? v I do not suffer, or Make others suffer, yet I am told that I am Heartless, lack empathy, Am mean. My rage speaks truth, And the truth can help you. vi It's all in your head, right?
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Mar 13, 2011
Mar 13, 2011 at 8:49 PM UTC
Six More Words -- Response to Isaac Lozano's "Six Words"
i "It's over, isn't it?" You ask, Unsure of what to do. Bask In the glory of forgetting a Fight, fulfilling what I would say, Night coming to take me away, For I cannot stay. Breakaway, nay, My mind will not sway. Play For the day I will say And pray that I must get Away. Away. Away. And never ask In what way I did bask. ii But the words are cut short.  iii And someone else will die tonight, This is simply the human plight. We do not control, or know, How we'll react to Death's scythe.* Running up from behind, poked sides? Charging headlong, blind, and teeth bright? Or a chase, running shorts chafing? But I have not finished wri- iv The fever is the cure, no? v I do not suffer, or Make others suffer, yet I am told that I am Heartless, lack empathy, Am mean. My rage speaks truth, And the truth can help you. vi It's all in your head, right?
Contains excerpts from Isaac Lozano's "Six Words" which can be found here: http://hellopoetry.com/#!/poem/six-words *This is supposed to triple as scythe, the tool; sight; and sigh. Still in progress.
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Mar 13, 2011
Mar 13, 2011 at 8:49 PM UTC
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