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I stood in the freezing cold. And the rain felt like snowballs. On a side bench under neon lights, I sat. With a blue circle surrounding my eye, when somebody almost knocked my lights out. Just staring at those who gawked at me. As I smoked under a store roof top. This is when I saw you. You walked on by. To my surprise, You were as handsome as ever. "Life must be treating him well." There was a provoking sound out of the gaping sky to jump in front of a bus. You would pay attention. Maybe stop to see me lying there. I'm not okay as my quivery voice claimed. But, you didn't detect the disturbing echos in the background. So I hung up the phone. I, the old worn out dish rag. I, the door mat to most people. Still, I thought you would have an instant flashback. A relapse of our long history together. Instead, here I stand in the freezing rain. And you can't even remember my name. It's Ada... I uttered. The lighter burning my fingertips. The expression on your face. It told our story. I kept walking through the foggy night.
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Mar 8, 2011
Mar 8, 2011 at 8:03 AM UTC
The Freezing Rain
I stood in the freezing cold. And the rain felt like snowballs. On a side bench under neon lights, I sat. With a blue circle surrounding my eye, when somebody almost knocked my lights out. Just staring at those who gawked at me. As I smoked under a store roof top. This is when I saw you. You walked on by. To my surprise, You were as handsome as ever. "Life must be treating him well." There was a provoking sound out of the gaping sky to jump in front of a bus. You would pay attention. Maybe stop to see me lying there. I'm not okay as my quivery voice claimed. But, you didn't detect the disturbing echos in the background. So I hung up the phone. I, the old worn out dish rag. I, the door mat to most people. Still, I thought you would have an instant flashback. A relapse of our long history together. Instead, here I stand in the freezing rain. And you can't even remember my name. It's Ada... I uttered. The lighter burning my fingertips. The expression on your face. It told our story. I kept walking through the foggy night.
By Jessica Hughes ©2011 All Rights Reserved by Author
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Mar 8, 2011
Mar 8, 2011 at 8:03 AM UTC
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