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This thought occurred — behind the shed — A blinding fog inside my head. Barbed snags, held me there — Each word a **** too deep to bear. Silence washed in — time stood still. The darkness passed — so too the chill. The story’s end, sunlit leaves will write. Till then — a shallow breath of life.                         —•0•—
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Nov 20, 2025
Nov 20, 2025 at 12:30 PM UTC
Behind the Shed
This thought occurred — behind the shed — A blinding fog inside my head. Barbed snags, held me there — Each word a **** too deep to bear. Silence washed in — time stood still. The darkness passed — so too the chill. The story’s end, sunlit leaves will write. Till then — a shallow breath of life.                         —•0•—
Sometimes after hearing a parent’s hurtful, angry words, frightening ideas overcome a child's thinking.
david-anthony-carrillo
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Nov 20, 2025
Nov 20, 2025 at 12:30 PM UTC
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