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can we really make this work? smoke one thousand cigarettes sleep one hundred hours act like **** for all the times and still love one another? is that what it really is? this thing they speak of the undying the eternal can we? just you and i mere mortals our lives slipping away some faster than others but always looming you're not a robot and i well i never wanted to be but it doesnt mean i still dont fear death even though im always waiting for it its always looming its forever been my shadow can we continue on this way? for eternity infinity lord father god we pray (prey) on full disclosure and the tells (and tales) of each we take pleasure and solace and grief and guilt and home (comfort) in knowing all the things every single thing do me a favor? tell me them all again and this time i promise to write them all down im so afraid to forget and apart of me knows i never will but the rest of me remembers i can't not and that is my greatest fear can we keep writing forever? line upon line because we know (and rejoice) knowing that others read them and take pleasure in them but what we get off on the most is writing them for each other can we always feel this way? despite locations distances abilities to breathe and desire can we please promise? to one day rest together the only sure promise i will ever ask of you forget the truths and the honesty and the lies mostly forget the demise can we please remember? the time in our hearts individually where the thought of one another the feeling of our love made each other so anxious so happy so nervous when our love was at its best? first date nuts tents camping adventures spit wars feet washes sunsets sun rises sun baths sun gazes all things sun star trek star wars star gazing all things stars big spoons little spoons spoons all the times crooks nooks ***** skitts triangles kiddens stomachs Pickett wildflowers the list will never end it can never end but mostly i miss your voice and your touch your kiss caress the grin that has made me weak weak for fifteen years so i just ask can we, please? if just one more time.
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Apr 2, 2015
Apr 2, 2015 at 5:28 AM UTC
can we
can we really make this work? smoke one thousand cigarettes sleep one hundred hours act like **** for all the times and still love one another? is that what it really is? this thing they speak of the undying the eternal can we? just you and i mere mortals our lives slipping away some faster than others but always looming you're not a robot and i well i never wanted to be but it doesnt mean i still dont fear death even though im always waiting for it its always looming its forever been my shadow can we continue on this way? for eternity infinity lord father god we pray (prey) on full disclosure and the tells (and tales) of each we take pleasure and solace and grief and guilt and home (comfort) in knowing all the things every single thing do me a favor? tell me them all again and this time i promise to write them all down im so afraid to forget and apart of me knows i never will but the rest of me remembers i can't not and that is my greatest fear can we keep writing forever? line upon line because we know (and rejoice) knowing that others read them and take pleasure in them but what we get off on the most is writing them for each other can we always feel this way? despite locations distances abilities to breathe and desire can we please promise? to one day rest together the only sure promise i will ever ask of you forget the truths and the honesty and the lies mostly forget the demise can we please remember? the time in our hearts individually where the thought of one another the feeling of our love made each other so anxious so happy so nervous when our love was at its best? first date nuts tents camping adventures spit wars feet washes sunsets sun rises sun baths sun gazes all things sun star trek star wars star gazing all things stars big spoons little spoons spoons all the times crooks nooks ***** skitts triangles kiddens stomachs Pickett wildflowers the list will never end it can never end but mostly i miss your voice and your touch your kiss caress the grin that has made me weak weak for fifteen years so i just ask can we, please? if just one more time.
we always can. see you soon.
jane-tricky
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Apr 2, 2015
Apr 2, 2015 at 5:28 AM UTC
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