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Fed up with the ways of men, I decided to create my own, And he would be perfect. I took a chunk of wood and began to carve, My knife coaxing each perfect body part into existence: Dark eyes Full lips Broad shoulders Long legs Strong hands And a perfect...well...you know. Then I carved the magic word into his chest And he became flesh. He did everything a woman wanted: He listened well Never talked back Never got mad Made love on command And said those words we all crave "I love you" All with eyes as empty as bottomless pits.
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Sep 20, 2014
Sep 20, 2014 at 2:45 PM UTC
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Fed up with the ways of men, I decided to create my own, And he would be perfect. I took a chunk of wood and began to carve, My knife coaxing each perfect body part into existence: Dark eyes Full lips Broad shoulders Long legs Strong hands And a perfect...well...you know. Then I carved the magic word into his chest And he became flesh. He did everything a woman wanted: He listened well Never talked back Never got mad Made love on command And said those words we all crave "I love you" All with eyes as empty as bottomless pits.
Poem 2 in my "7 Poems in 7 Days" self-challenge.  Bonus challenge:  All titles must be school subjects.  Feel free to join me!
marissa-kohlman
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Sep 20, 2014
Sep 20, 2014 at 2:45 PM UTC
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