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There is a subtle emptiness Placing a shutter, blankest white Before the dripping ink of night Cupped in the brown they call my eyes. The pounding of a silent voice Upon the bottom of my mind. A wordless tremble in my hands, Some concrete in my smile. Oh well, I murmured to the voice, What matter if I don’t rejoice? A passing whim, a selfish choice, Then I’ll be fine tomorrow.   The giants, oh! They raise their arms,   Pulling the membrane off the moon,   Unveiling core of blinding light,   A blossom of sundews.   My giant! Love! A chandelier,   Glaring upon my feverish skull,   Your smile of stone and eyes of ink,   Thee is a subtle emptiness,   My dear, you truly make me sick,   Both arrogance and self-hatred,   An inner eye that never blinks,   That never looks outside yourself.
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Sep 12, 2025
Sep 12, 2025 at 5:48 AM UTC
ms.Perfect and her voices
There is a subtle emptiness Placing a shutter, blankest white Before the dripping ink of night Cupped in the brown they call my eyes. The pounding of a silent voice Upon the bottom of my mind. A wordless tremble in my hands, Some concrete in my smile. Oh well, I murmured to the voice, What matter if I don’t rejoice? A passing whim, a selfish choice, Then I’ll be fine tomorrow.   The giants, oh! They raise their arms,   Pulling the membrane off the moon,   Unveiling core of blinding light,   A blossom of sundews.   My giant! Love! A chandelier,   Glaring upon my feverish skull,   Your smile of stone and eyes of ink,   Thee is a subtle emptiness,   My dear, you truly make me sick,   Both arrogance and self-hatred,   An inner eye that never blinks,   That never looks outside yourself.
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Sep 12, 2025
Sep 12, 2025 at 5:48 AM UTC
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