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how could there ever have been a moment between us a vast moment of perfect eternity when you won't even look me in the eyes? how could i have ever lied to you and yet still act surprised when our pathetic excuses for conversations liquify into pools of chewed up curiosities? i guess i wonder sometimes maybe we...i don't know, never mind but sometimes i just hope, you know?
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Mar 31, 2013
Mar 31, 2013 at 6:13 AM UTC
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how could there ever have been a moment between us a vast moment of perfect eternity when you won't even look me in the eyes? how could i have ever lied to you and yet still act surprised when our pathetic excuses for conversations liquify into pools of chewed up curiosities? i guess i wonder sometimes maybe we...i don't know, never mind but sometimes i just hope, you know?
this feels a bit incomplete, but part of me thinks, in a sad way, it says all it needs to say. what do you think? Thanks in advance.
brandon-c-williams
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Mar 31, 2013
Mar 31, 2013 at 6:13 AM UTC
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