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I watched from a distance As we swayed and danced To music made for no-one But the two of us Paying no mind to strangers Who called us out Who called us weird Who said you weren't enough. I watched from a distance As your breath hitched, your steps faltered Your record scratched And my hologram never heard it. Until I felt your hand slipping from mine Was your smile always this strained? You didn't tell anyone You made your last day count Now I count how many breaths Since you were still with me Since I knocked on your door and it never opened.
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May 16
May 16, 2026 at 5:36 AM UTC
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I watched from a distance As we swayed and danced To music made for no-one But the two of us Paying no mind to strangers Who called us out Who called us weird Who said you weren't enough. I watched from a distance As your breath hitched, your steps faltered Your record scratched And my hologram never heard it. Until I felt your hand slipping from mine Was your smile always this strained? You didn't tell anyone You made your last day count Now I count how many breaths Since you were still with me Since I knocked on your door and it never opened.
Please talk to someone if you are not ok. It won't make you seem weak, in fact, it would mean you're braver than I ever was. Thank you, and I love you.
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15/On a date with Death
May 16
May 16, 2026 at 5:36 AM UTC
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