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This autumn season For fall scented candles Give depression a reason To prove a counterexample For fall scented candles Remind us of winter To prove a counterexample How people wither Remind us of winter Seasonal depression's returns How people wither With personal concerns Seasonal depression returns To prepare for a storm With personal concerns Leaving little warm. Give depression a reason To prepare for a storm Leaving little warm This autumn season.
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Oct 11, 2019
Oct 11, 2019 at 11:51 PM UTC
'Tis the Season
This autumn season For fall scented candles Give depression a reason To prove a counterexample For fall scented candles Remind us of winter To prove a counterexample How people wither Remind us of winter Seasonal depression's returns How people wither With personal concerns Seasonal depression returns To prepare for a storm With personal concerns Leaving little warm. Give depression a reason To prepare for a storm Leaving little warm This autumn season.
Pantoum about fall and seasonal depression. I'm not sure if the last stanza leaves the reader with the idea that depression is going to be fought in the storm, I hope so because I wanted to end this on an uplifting note. Please let me know what you think.
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The_Kindling
24/M/Colorado
Oct 11, 2019
Oct 11, 2019 at 11:51 PM UTC
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