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Away from the nicely lit place, where guests chatted and giggled, we sat face to face, in the after glow of our smoldering new found love, for quite a while,wondering within us, how could emotional fireworks blow up amidst prolonged pandemonium,like this? Words to us, seemed quite out of place I just gazed and gazed in to her eyes she blushed,like a first time kisser. A faint beam from a distance, made her emotionally charged  face look all  aflame. Her nostrils pretty attractive,perfect rings looked flared,like an animal's,I noticed that catches a scent, awaited for long; seemed like she had an urgent need to express. I had a guess, but her words were distracting, "I love your fingers"she lisped, my index finger on the right hand she started to pet, "It's so enticing"she spoke as if she substitutes a thing for one different. as the compulsion was such. Time stood still, in the middle,but that wasn't a hitch! I remembered she had to leave, shortly but the tide of our passions was flooding still, so we created darkness at will around us.
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Jun 13, 2017
Jun 13, 2017 at 8:25 AM UTC
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Away from the nicely lit place, where guests chatted and giggled, we sat face to face, in the after glow of our smoldering new found love, for quite a while,wondering within us, how could emotional fireworks blow up amidst prolonged pandemonium,like this? Words to us, seemed quite out of place I just gazed and gazed in to her eyes she blushed,like a first time kisser. A faint beam from a distance, made her emotionally charged  face look all  aflame. Her nostrils pretty attractive,perfect rings looked flared,like an animal's,I noticed that catches a scent, awaited for long; seemed like she had an urgent need to express. I had a guess, but her words were distracting, "I love your fingers"she lisped, my index finger on the right hand she started to pet, "It's so enticing"she spoke as if she substitutes a thing for one different. as the compulsion was such. Time stood still, in the middle,but that wasn't a hitch! I remembered she had to leave, shortly but the tide of our passions was flooding still, so we created darkness at will around us.
k-balachandran
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Jun 13, 2017
Jun 13, 2017 at 8:25 AM UTC
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