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At The Cafe I heard her say to the teary-eyed lady as they sliced their custard creams, " Move on and go find someone else" As if suggesting to take that knife and slice that face out of her brain and replace it with another. As if perhaps she should cut out her heart and separate it from the rest of her. I suppose the thoughtless lady was only trying to help. I suppose that's normal procedure in such circumstances. Like quickly go find a lollipop for god's sake. I felt like saying to the broken woman; wait a bit. No need to be in such a rush. This terrible ache, this fierce wrenching this oozing sore is love disguised. You'll come to it. You will. No substitute necessary. That someone else is waiting in the dim horizon, fresh faced and true with eyes that pierce through the mish mash of dough and syrup of wounds and ruins of love and war and sharp metal objects. That someone else is you, whole and undisguised. You can't rush that. You'll come to it You will.
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Feb 23, 2020
Feb 23, 2020 at 6:07 AM UTC
At The Cafe
Cast to the river's depth Punctured on prevalent pieces Stone and flesh come to one Commander has fallen Leader’s reign comes to an end Not by human hand By chance Roll fate’s dice Taking up the mantle Emotions soon dismantled Feel like an imposter Invading a title I never deserved Everyone’s got their doubts There are many routes Down to the grave Avoiding grief at all costs Last time I led Looked for bodies not men Time taught me Chance is the way of life Brace the spirits of the men Recognize the wishes of the women “Welcome to paradise” Who’s paradise is this? Not one I pursue Slung around wrists Cold metal I was raised in Leading brought me trouble Now I end where I began On the wrong side of life Corrupted mind Purified heart It’s all I can muster Fresh out of luster
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Feb 3, 2020
Feb 3, 2020 at 9:26 PM UTC
[Jurymast]
We hide in the saddest places Because no one looks there, Under the stones that have been left alone Never to be unturned, I've learned Its better to never open the bottle They'd rather I wallow in waste Because that makes me convenient, that's fair. I'm the substitute even in the stories I write So why would any other have any other sight? Isnt that right, Claire? Its easy to dance like no one is watching When you know no one is watching. Where's the auction I turn back on my body The auctioneer is stuck, no one's wanting The ghosts populate my cranium space, The poltergeists are not done haunting I want to taste real emotion instead of taunting, I'm just a host for a past still walking. They ask for real answers but my written tongue Can spread darkness like cancer, Can give hope to the hopeless But some don't know what hope is Can give hope to the hopeless But maybe you noticed, now I'm the hopeless
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Dec 9, 2019
Dec 9, 2019 at 3:02 PM UTC
Substitute
Writers, poets, artists, songwriters bleed pain into art. But don'y you understand pain is not art. They embellish pain, to cement the heartache. They craft darkness hoping to enlighten. But in the end, agony is agony, no matter how you express, how you make it bleed. Emotions from words, on tear stained pages captivate readers making them believe there is solace in darkness and leave them forlorn to be adorned. But their intention was not to glamorize plan but rather to let it be their outlet of expression, therapy and to create. In the end there is no substitute, agony is agony, grief is grief, illness is illness and that what it will be.
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Jul 24, 2019
Jul 24, 2019 at 5:14 PM UTC
Glamorizing Pain
Affection for you I can't undo, Adhered to you like a tattoo. I'm a substitute, I know. Hard for me to let-go. Painful to dry the ink you dipped into.
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Apr 8, 2019
Apr 8, 2019 at 5:11 PM UTC
The Fling
Dont you worry little boy, in the end you will find a substitute for every **** thing.
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Sep 5, 2018
Sep 5, 2018 at 2:01 PM UTC
Untitled
**One after the other I keep finding a substitute.** *A substitute for love, One by one they leave To create a new mess out of the old, making me colder to fold! One by one they venture into me, a life to fulfill my dreams A new dream I see,* **To love each of them Whether they stay or leave!** 10-06-2017
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Jul 2, 2017
Jul 2, 2017 at 4:00 AM UTC
One after another
You were substituted with the words, and I'm still writing.....
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Jul 1, 2017
Jul 1, 2017 at 11:25 PM UTC
Substitute...10W
Away from the nicely lit place, where guests chatted and giggled, we sat face to face, in the after glow of our smoldering new found love, for quite a while,wondering within us, how could emotional fireworks blow up amidst prolonged pandemonium,like this? Words to us, seemed quite out of place I just gazed and gazed in to her eyes she blushed,like a first time kisser. A faint beam from a distance, made her emotionally charged  face look all  aflame. Her nostrils pretty attractive,perfect rings looked flared,like an animal's,I noticed that catches a scent, awaited for long; seemed like she had an urgent need to express. I had a guess, but her words were distracting, "I love your fingers"she lisped, my index finger on the right hand she started to pet, "It's so enticing"she spoke as if she substitutes a thing for one different. as the compulsion was such. Time stood still, in the middle,but that wasn't a hitch! I remembered she had to leave, shortly but the tide of our passions was flooding still, so we created darkness at will around us.
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Jun 13, 2017
Jun 13, 2017 at 8:25 AM UTC
The substitute
*Relationship after relationships begins and ends quite often.. Each are are superbly selected not by money or humor or any other thing except the mystery they hold.. I am a curious lover, I seek mystery in each of them until one leaves, I seek for the same substitute all over again!*
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Apr 13, 2017
Apr 13, 2017 at 10:46 AM UTC
Puzzle of my love stories
she's not mad at him she place all blame on herself they both agreed; only friends with benefits she can't change the way he feels about her so why does she put herself directly in the line of fire even if it may sooth the urge for just a little while maybe she'll add an extra splash of red or pink to her lips enticing him to pucker up she doesn't want to be alone yet she knows he is just her imaginary substitute a fake smile, holding back her tears, and walking away into her cave of loneliness will the lights of love ever come on for her or will she be sitting in the dark forever?
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Sep 18, 2016
Sep 18, 2016 at 8:46 PM UTC
Unbalanced Mind
Not as sweet, but hits the spot on this rainy Summer’s eve; underneath the bursting clouds, taste buds seeking a release. Need a little pick-me-up, a familiar medicine, satisfaction guaranteed, with a lenient return policy. Finally, you feel her shape, unseen on the bottom shelf: a natural alternative to the sugar you can’t have.
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Sep 14, 2016
Sep 14, 2016 at 2:16 PM UTC
Substitute
"Ma'am, will you buy these?" the saleslady asked Claire once more. Claire looked at Edna like asking her help in making a decision. "Do you want them? Then buy them," Edna's voice is low. She pity her sister but she doesn't want to show it to her. Claire got her wallet and smiled to the saleslady. "I will," she said. Tomorrow, they will go back to their province. Claire will not ask Ron again to give the original wedding ring to her. Tomorrow, Claire and Ron will wear the sign that they are husband and wife.
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Jan 26, 2015
Jan 26, 2015 at 4:30 AM UTC
THE RING (Pt. 2)
I always thought I knew what love was. Then I met you. You could reach places of my soul that even I didn’t know existed, each smile was another reason to live, Every time you laughed I fell more in love. every time I looked into your coke-and-whiskey eyes each pant after a kiss carried a thousand poems about those eyes in it. You gazed at me like an artist would admire Van Gogh, you held me like I was the answer and for a while, I thought I was, with Your fingers pressing into my hips in a way that I later found out was to intercept the thought of your hands on her hips. You played me like I was the last cello on earth- but not in a good way. And I know it’s pathetic, but you’re the heaven and the earth to me, because you were the only person that could make me smile the way you did. It was supposed to be just *** but I’m in love with you- present tense. I want to lay in bed with you under sparkling blue Christmas lights strewn out across my walls like everything I never thought I could say but found the opportunity to, I want to kiss your scars, I want to fix your broken hearts with duct tape and a song, and I want to admire every inch of your body because it’s perfect, even if you don’t think so. I want to do things to you that I’ll never have the opportunity to do again, because while everything about you wrecks everything about me in what I thought was the best possible way, I turned out to be a rebound. A substitute for a girl who gave you a murky puddle just big enough to catch the reflection of you two hand in hand, while you drowned me in the clearest ocean I could have given you.
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Oct 31, 2014
Oct 31, 2014 at 1:43 PM UTC
(I wrote this a year ago.)
I always thought I knew what love was. Then I met you. You could reach places of my soul that even I didn’t know existed, each smile was another reason to live, Every time you laughed I fell more in love. every time I looked into your coke-and-whiskey eyes each pant after a kiss carried a thousand poems about those eyes in it. You gazed at me like an artist would admire Van Gogh, you held me like I was the answer and for a while, I thought I was, with Your fingers pressing into my hips in a way that I later found out was to intercept the thought of your hands on her hips. You played me like I was the last cello on earth- but not in a good way. And I know it’s pathetic, but you’re the heaven and the earth to me, because you were the only person that could make me smile the way you did. It was supposed to be just *** but I’m in love with you- present tense. I want to lay in bed with you under sparkling blue Christmas lights strewn out across my walls like everything I never thought I could say but found the opportunity to, I want to kiss your scars, I want to fix your broken hearts with duct tape and a song, and I want to admire every inch of your body because it’s perfect, even if you don’t think so. I want to do things to you that I’ll never have the opportunity to do again, because while everything about you wrecks everything about me in what I thought was the best possible way, I turned out to be a rebound. A substitute for a girl who gave you a murky puddle just big enough to catch the reflection of you two hand in hand, while you drowned me in the clearest ocean I could have given you.
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He steps out for air It is time for a smoke He craves the nicotine Yet what he exhales Is electronic. It is Thursday night Happy hour about to start He is not allowed to drink It has the same color Apparently with the taste Of what he is aiming for. What then is the point To root for a substitute Is it so hard to swear off We need familiarity that suits. A discrepancy between What is and what seems. Using this word to replace another Perhaps one to soothe the torture Finding excuses to justify actions A lie in disguise enough to comfort. He decides to go cold turkey It is harder but at least He is not pretending He feels his truth, forgets the substitute He learned what passive smoking means And as of late, Apple juice had become his drink.
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May 27, 2014
May 27, 2014 at 4:42 AM UTC
Substitute
There’s a noose around our necks to drive out feeling, To **** the sweetest instincts planted deep within our souls. It’s too hard to feel, it hurts too much, so **** it – Replacing it with lust so that we think we are alive But we have lost it. I think therefore I am?  So said that Greek man. Someone could likewise reason that “I feel, therefore I am” It’s a possible conjecture but the suffering incurred Is overboard , impossible, I cannot cope with that. I’ll take the substitute. This lust gives me to think I’m feeling something, Be it money lust, drink, drugs, or sexuality or things. Somehow, though my ego escalates, I’m feeling grand, But my relationships are failing, flawed, I cannot understand – I’ll take the substitute. I’m at the bottom of the pit.  I’m on the outer.   The substitute has got me.  I’m in isolated rink. It’s living hell.  My friends are gone, and everything is bad. I cannot cope with this.  I need some love. There’s none around. I’ll take the substitute. I’ll take the substitute. I’ll take the substitute. I’ll take the substitute. This is hell. God, where are You? “I’m right here.” “I took the substitute.” "I know." "It's finished me." "I know." "Help me." “Will you take Me now?” “I sure don’t want the substitute any more.” “Will you take Me now?” “Yes.” “You believe Me now?” “Yes.” “Do you believe that I love you?” “Yes” “Do you understand, I did the substitution for you?” “On the Cross?” “That’s it.” “I believe you.” “Do you trust Me in all respects?” “It’s either You or the other substitute?” “It’s either Me or the other substitute.” “I’d rather trust You.” “Come then.  I love you.   Walk with Me and I’ll restore your deeply broken heart. You are My child. Draw ever closer, never to depart. Revive yourself in Me.  My Words will give you back your Life. I’m your blood brother, at your back when problem scenes are rife. My Spirit, Truth, empowers you in strife.”
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Jan 27, 2014
Jan 27, 2014 at 10:21 PM UTC
Deep Calls to Deep
There’s a noose around our necks to drive out feeling, To **** the sweetest instincts planted deep within our souls. It’s too hard to feel, it hurts too much, so **** it – Replacing it with lust so that we think we are alive But we have lost it. I think therefore I am?  So said that Greek man. Someone could likewise reason that “I feel, therefore I am” It’s a possible conjecture but the suffering incurred Is overboard , impossible, I cannot cope with that. I’ll take the substitute. This lust gives me to think I’m feeling something, Be it money lust, drink, drugs, or sexuality or things. Somehow, though my ego escalates, I’m feeling grand, But my relationships are failing, flawed, I cannot understand – I’ll take the substitute. I’m at the bottom of the pit.  I’m on the outer.   The substitute has got me.  I’m in isolated rink. It’s living hell.  My friends are gone, and everything is bad. I cannot cope with this.  I need some love. There’s none around. I’ll take the substitute. I’ll take the substitute. I’ll take the substitute. I’ll take the substitute. This is hell. God, where are You? “I’m right here.” “I took the substitute.” "I know." "It's finished me." "I know." "Help me." “Will you take Me now?” “I sure don’t want the substitute any more.” “Will you take Me now?” “Yes.” “You believe Me now?” “Yes.” “Do you believe that I love you?” “Yes” “Do you understand, I did the substitution for you?” “On the Cross?” “That’s it.” “I believe you.” “Do you trust Me in all respects?” “It’s either You or the other substitute?” “It’s either Me or the other substitute.” “I’d rather trust You.” “Come then.  I love you.   Walk with Me and I’ll restore your deeply broken heart. You are My child. Draw ever closer, never to depart. Revive yourself in Me.  My Words will give you back your Life. I’m your blood brother, at your back when problem scenes are rife. My Spirit, Truth, empowers you in strife.”
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