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I could swear the way the men clustered around me after meeting they thought this below was a mere pretty fantasy....and perhaps you alone know differently, Adrian. (sonnet #MMMMMMCCCCIII) Lo, how I hear the Beatles' cherished scale Of "Yesterday--" 'non waltzing, like the sense We know by instinct, though by Shakespeare thence I thought to ink--what? cycling through the tale Of prairie grasses blackbirds' rakish hail Mocks?  Or those blue skies cloud fluffs whitely fence In lazy, um, battalions?  Or from hence As Will said, how I feel, likeas t'avail? When you say "lacy," to ask me if your Prompt, erm, hit home?  And how I long to do-- Not home-made popsicles, nor when in tour I lost my first tooth blowing up that new Um, kiddie pool--but you know.  Is it poor? Cuz summer's so short-lived, but I love you. 05Jun17b
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Jun 11, 2017
Jun 11, 2017 at 2:51 PM UTC
Mebbe It's Our Age-Old Secret?
I could swear the way the men clustered around me after meeting they thought this below was a mere pretty fantasy....and perhaps you alone know differently, Adrian. (sonnet #MMMMMMCCCCIII) Lo, how I hear the Beatles' cherished scale Of "Yesterday--" 'non waltzing, like the sense We know by instinct, though by Shakespeare thence I thought to ink--what? cycling through the tale Of prairie grasses blackbirds' rakish hail Mocks?  Or those blue skies cloud fluffs whitely fence In lazy, um, battalions?  Or from hence As Will said, how I feel, likeas t'avail? When you say "lacy," to ask me if your Prompt, erm, hit home?  And how I long to do-- Not home-made popsicles, nor when in tour I lost my first tooth blowing up that new Um, kiddie pool--but you know.  Is it poor? Cuz summer's so short-lived, but I love you. 05Jun17b
Yo. Her prompt for our June Writer's Workshop meeting was "summer" via memories, perspectives, and of course, passion. This was my entry.
JennyGordon
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51/F/Bolingbrook, IL
Jun 11, 2017
Jun 11, 2017 at 2:51 PM UTC
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