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I look up to your face, Oblivious, you gaze down, Every cell a brilliant shade of blue, Eyes reflecting a greenish hue; You don't realise were you are, Fields of colour you ignore, African sunsets I know you would adore, People, places you never even glance at, Too engrossed in adverts- adverse to books and that; This haven you think you've created, It's really a jungle- endless and endless, Constantly chopping down trees, Searching for a way out, But forgetting to open your eyes: Loosing yourself in an electronic jungle, loosing yourself in your phone, loosing yourself in your selfie- self harm; self loath; self hate; Look up, Get up, Move, Mabey you wont feel quite so...                                                                                                                                            L                                                                  O                                                                                                                                                                                                                             S        T
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Jun 29, 2018
Jun 29, 2018 at 1:37 PM UTC
Electronic jungle
I look up to your face, Oblivious, you gaze down, Every cell a brilliant shade of blue, Eyes reflecting a greenish hue; You don't realise were you are, Fields of colour you ignore, African sunsets I know you would adore, People, places you never even glance at, Too engrossed in adverts- adverse to books and that; This haven you think you've created, It's really a jungle- endless and endless, Constantly chopping down trees, Searching for a way out, But forgetting to open your eyes: Loosing yourself in an electronic jungle, loosing yourself in your phone, loosing yourself in your selfie- self harm; self loath; self hate; Look up, Get up, Move, Mabey you wont feel quite so...                                                                                                                                            L                                                                  O                                                                                                                                                                                                                             S        T
Just irritated by all the people stood around on their phones, together but apart.
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14/Europe
Jun 29, 2018
Jun 29, 2018 at 1:37 PM UTC
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