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Waiting for the train come It was peak time The train station was packed like sardine packed Full of workers hoping to go back home to their families All the sweats they have given out on that day Was it all worth it? Standing besides the railway Fantasizing, imagining If i jump will anyone help me? Will anyone pull me out of the railway? Small lights catched my eye 1km away Oh there's the train coming! Everyone was colliding and pushing each other to get into the train Because you don't want to miss the train It was near dawn, everyone wants to go back before dawn approaches They would do anything to get in I was bumped into a guy, he was sweet And then things get so awkward in the train I was seating infront of the guy It was one of the moments I would like to escape from But not long after that, we hopped off at our station Heading back home And until now, I could never forget his face :)
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Dec 5, 2013
Dec 5, 2013 at 1:13 PM UTC
Wanderers
Waiting for the train come It was peak time The train station was packed like sardine packed Full of workers hoping to go back home to their families All the sweats they have given out on that day Was it all worth it? Standing besides the railway Fantasizing, imagining If i jump will anyone help me? Will anyone pull me out of the railway? Small lights catched my eye 1km away Oh there's the train coming! Everyone was colliding and pushing each other to get into the train Because you don't want to miss the train It was near dawn, everyone wants to go back before dawn approaches They would do anything to get in I was bumped into a guy, he was sweet And then things get so awkward in the train I was seating infront of the guy It was one of the moments I would like to escape from But not long after that, we hopped off at our station Heading back home And until now, I could never forget his face :)
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Dec 5, 2013
Dec 5, 2013 at 1:13 PM UTC
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