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"Do you see the sky?" I asked as I waited for a response. I waited, and waited and waited. I realized that there wouldn't be one, because the conversationalist I speak to (in my head) has left. The sun sets to the north of the mountains, if you're standing in the front yard it's hard to see. But I see it when I dream, when I think of happier things, I wonder why I feel so distant, I wonder why when I pull my irises back into the socket where they sleep. "Do you see the sky?" I asked You responded, finally, with the most dismal response one could conjur "that I do." When all I wanted, was to share it with you.
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Sep 4, 2015
Sep 4, 2015 at 2:00 AM UTC
Miscommuni--
"Do you see the sky?" I asked as I waited for a response. I waited, and waited and waited. I realized that there wouldn't be one, because the conversationalist I speak to (in my head) has left. The sun sets to the north of the mountains, if you're standing in the front yard it's hard to see. But I see it when I dream, when I think of happier things, I wonder why I feel so distant, I wonder why when I pull my irises back into the socket where they sleep. "Do you see the sky?" I asked You responded, finally, with the most dismal response one could conjur "that I do." When all I wanted, was to share it with you.
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Sep 4, 2015
Sep 4, 2015 at 2:00 AM UTC
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