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I grab a shoe a shoe a shoe Because everyone wears shoes Because everyone needs shoes I grab a shoe and I shove my foot straight in Because that's what everyone does Because my foot wasn't good enough as is. Despite, supporting my weight and keeping me afloat. My foot needs more, to be complete. Because all feet get cold, I guess. But this shoe annoys, it suffocates it squishes my toes that just want to wriggle free And I'll have to wear it, as uncomfortable as it is, until I wear it down But soon after that, this one will have given up on me. And I'll just have to get a new one, and go through the whole thing, Because everyone needs shoes All their lives But even after I have shoved this foot into that shoe the ordeal isn't yet over. a shoe needs effort to work right you've got to tie it up to keep it on. So I grab this lace, and I scoop up that lace and I pull like I've seen others do, the grip on my foot gets tighter, But this shoe's not going anywhere either. So I start crisscrossing and looping and more pulling and stretching and soon, I've got a finger or two stuck. Frustrated, I yank them out. and the whole thing unravels. and I've got to start again. But to no avail; with no point Because even when I slow down, I get distracted, Even when I focus, I fail But I spend hours and hours trying to knot these **** laces trying to tie this **** shoe Because everyone wears shoes. They make it look so easy, They make it look so fun, But my foot just wants free. To roam without constraints. But bare-feet aren't the norm, So I'll keep sitting here, Slowly learning to tie my shoe.
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Jan 4, 2011
Jan 4, 2011 at 10:03 PM UTC
Learning to Tie My Shoe
I grab a shoe a shoe a shoe Because everyone wears shoes Because everyone needs shoes I grab a shoe and I shove my foot straight in Because that's what everyone does Because my foot wasn't good enough as is. Despite, supporting my weight and keeping me afloat. My foot needs more, to be complete. Because all feet get cold, I guess. But this shoe annoys, it suffocates it squishes my toes that just want to wriggle free And I'll have to wear it, as uncomfortable as it is, until I wear it down But soon after that, this one will have given up on me. And I'll just have to get a new one, and go through the whole thing, Because everyone needs shoes All their lives But even after I have shoved this foot into that shoe the ordeal isn't yet over. a shoe needs effort to work right you've got to tie it up to keep it on. So I grab this lace, and I scoop up that lace and I pull like I've seen others do, the grip on my foot gets tighter, But this shoe's not going anywhere either. So I start crisscrossing and looping and more pulling and stretching and soon, I've got a finger or two stuck. Frustrated, I yank them out. and the whole thing unravels. and I've got to start again. But to no avail; with no point Because even when I slow down, I get distracted, Even when I focus, I fail But I spend hours and hours trying to knot these **** laces trying to tie this **** shoe Because everyone wears shoes. They make it look so easy, They make it look so fun, But my foot just wants free. To roam without constraints. But bare-feet aren't the norm, So I'll keep sitting here, Slowly learning to tie my shoe.
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Jan 4, 2011
Jan 4, 2011 at 10:03 PM UTC
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