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Woken up by splattering rain A raging storm outside my walls I hear growling, screams and fire And the echo of fearful desperate calls Eyes wide open, I look out the window just to see the sky embraced with darkness No rain, no storm, no echoing calls just a nightmare, as the cause of this madness
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Jan 23, 2018
Jan 23, 2018 at 4:47 PM UTC
Nightmare
Woken up by splattering rain A raging storm outside my walls I hear growling, screams and fire And the echo of fearful desperate calls Eyes wide open, I look out the window just to see the sky embraced with darkness No rain, no storm, no echoing calls just a nightmare, as the cause of this madness
I thought I could write some shorter poems next to my longer ones. I would love to hear if those short poems are fine the way they are or if I should keep to write them longer with a bigger story behind it. Some Feedback would be much appreciated!
DrSabberlappen
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21/M/Germany
Jan 23, 2018
Jan 23, 2018 at 4:47 PM UTC
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