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A 'feeling'                 'clouds'                               over me I try to find the words to match it,    a phrase      that agrees with the emotion        and search the metaphor          to portray the image It fights for my attention     this 'feeling'   and I battle with it        for a time It does not waver       until I submit I slump, defeated sometimes        sitting with my pen Now may not be convenient       but 'now' is the time,                 apparently!! I offer   'patience' and the rhyming story   is permitted to unfold         and be told. As I sit   the words and phrases     are no longer jumbled         they're calm ..             and settle ..     like tiny                 white                      glittering flakes             within a snow globe
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May 3, 2014
May 3, 2014 at 4:29 AM UTC
Snowglobe
A 'feeling'                 'clouds'                               over me I try to find the words to match it,    a phrase      that agrees with the emotion        and search the metaphor          to portray the image It fights for my attention     this 'feeling'   and I battle with it        for a time It does not waver       until I submit I slump, defeated sometimes        sitting with my pen Now may not be convenient       but 'now' is the time,                 apparently!! I offer   'patience' and the rhyming story   is permitted to unfold         and be told. As I sit   the words and phrases     are no longer jumbled         they're calm ..             and settle ..     like tiny                 white                      glittering flakes             within a snow globe
LouiseMcKay
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May 3, 2014
May 3, 2014 at 4:29 AM UTC
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