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On my last drunken escapade, I was sitting in my girlfriend's living room. It was 3:28 am, I was ******* on a cheap bottle of ***** and It was ******* the soul right out of me. I knew things needed to change. She had just ****** me dry in the bedroom, and I was losing all my strength. I had the wisdom of a snail, inching along, waiting to be crushed. I wasn't drunk, just liquid smooth. Contemplating and configuring the degradation and the lack of windmills to chase. The mirror had become a horrible and pitiful place. Out of the corner of my eye, I saw a large shadow zip across the wall. A second later, our cat, Patches, leapt into the air. I heard a terrible Squeak, tweet, squawk, I ran to her and began prying at her mouth. It was a small night bird. I took it from her and put it outside. It was still alive, and there was no blood on my hands. I said, Bad Patches. It freaked me out. I woke up my girlfriend and told her what happened. She said, are you sure it wasn't a dream? I went into the bathroom and looked in the mirror. I drained the last of the ***** and walked to the hospital. When it's time, you just know.
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Jun 22, 2025
Jun 22, 2025 at 2:26 PM UTC
You Just Know
On my last drunken escapade, I was sitting in my girlfriend's living room. It was 3:28 am, I was ******* on a cheap bottle of ***** and It was ******* the soul right out of me. I knew things needed to change. She had just ****** me dry in the bedroom, and I was losing all my strength. I had the wisdom of a snail, inching along, waiting to be crushed. I wasn't drunk, just liquid smooth. Contemplating and configuring the degradation and the lack of windmills to chase. The mirror had become a horrible and pitiful place. Out of the corner of my eye, I saw a large shadow zip across the wall. A second later, our cat, Patches, leapt into the air. I heard a terrible Squeak, tweet, squawk, I ran to her and began prying at her mouth. It was a small night bird. I took it from her and put it outside. It was still alive, and there was no blood on my hands. I said, Bad Patches. It freaked me out. I woke up my girlfriend and told her what happened. She said, are you sure it wasn't a dream? I went into the bathroom and looked in the mirror. I drained the last of the ***** and walked to the hospital. When it's time, you just know.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7tpMDoNXg_U Here is a link to my you tube channel where I read from published books, they are Sleep Always Calls, Seedy Town Blues, and It's Just a Hop, Skip, and a Jump to the Madhouse, all are available on Amazon.
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Jun 22, 2025
Jun 22, 2025 at 2:26 PM UTC
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