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Breathe deep, fill your lungs expanding the chest to extend life slowly release with lips tightly pursed til the emptyness seems to make you gasp eyes defocus as if emptyed of life waiting for the next ******* in of air when it comes they focus again taking in the view over the vallys below Legs give a tremour, muscles exhausted knees requesting a seat to relieve the weight hamstrings are tight, threatening to snap tendons strained at the ankles, stretched just to far and all you can think as you stand there looking back from the direction that you came and shaking your head unbelieving the pain is why did I attempt to ride up this ****** hill
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Jul 13, 2025
Jul 13, 2025 at 3:28 PM UTC
Thinking the worst
Breathe deep, fill your lungs expanding the chest to extend life slowly release with lips tightly pursed til the emptyness seems to make you gasp eyes defocus as if emptyed of life waiting for the next ******* in of air when it comes they focus again taking in the view over the vallys below Legs give a tremour, muscles exhausted knees requesting a seat to relieve the weight hamstrings are tight, threatening to snap tendons strained at the ankles, stretched just to far and all you can think as you stand there looking back from the direction that you came and shaking your head unbelieving the pain is why did I attempt to ride up this ****** hill
chris-pea
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Jul 13, 2025
Jul 13, 2025 at 3:28 PM UTC
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