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We fell in love, life was perfect for awhile, Each touch was concentrated sunlight, We'd kiss, I'd taste whichever flavor ***** we drank earlier that night. Turned to you, I needed a friend, Called to vent every day, Time passed by us swiftly, Had my heart, things finally felt okay. Was the perfect romance for awhile But as the summers and winters went by Began to notice the thick haze we lived in, Something different in your eyes. Didn't know what was amiss, Keep me waiting up all night, Though I wasn't sure exactly what it was Knew you were hiding something out of sight. Uncovered more and more incessant lies, Started small then grew, neverending, We sadly floated further apart With each secret text you were sending. Was obvious there was someone else, She took all of your time, I figured you were buying her lots of gifts Because you never seemed to have a dime. Truth is, it was painfully clear, Should have seen it at the start, I was not the only one Owning a piece of your heart. The day I finally discovered who she was, Identity of your seductive sin, Is the day our world changed forever, Your mistresses name was ******
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Oct 15, 2018
Oct 15, 2018 at 3:53 PM UTC
The Other Woman
We fell in love, life was perfect for awhile, Each touch was concentrated sunlight, We'd kiss, I'd taste whichever flavor ***** we drank earlier that night. Turned to you, I needed a friend, Called to vent every day, Time passed by us swiftly, Had my heart, things finally felt okay. Was the perfect romance for awhile But as the summers and winters went by Began to notice the thick haze we lived in, Something different in your eyes. Didn't know what was amiss, Keep me waiting up all night, Though I wasn't sure exactly what it was Knew you were hiding something out of sight. Uncovered more and more incessant lies, Started small then grew, neverending, We sadly floated further apart With each secret text you were sending. Was obvious there was someone else, She took all of your time, I figured you were buying her lots of gifts Because you never seemed to have a dime. Truth is, it was painfully clear, Should have seen it at the start, I was not the only one Owning a piece of your heart. The day I finally discovered who she was, Identity of your seductive sin, Is the day our world changed forever, Your mistresses name was ******
What do you think? I thought it was a pretty good idea. Does anyone else have any metaphors or similes they'd like to contribute for cheating compared to drug addiction? If that makes sense..
AmandaKayBurke
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30/F/Alaska
Oct 15, 2018
Oct 15, 2018 at 3:53 PM UTC
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