remembering
how we used to be
back when
I couldn't breathe
call me breathless
bc you were breathtaking
and mine .
you were like a rose .
beautiful yet dangerous
with thorns tipped w poison .
grew up through a crack in the cement ,
felt nothing but continual abandonment
and an ache
for something you know nothing about .
maybe you were more like an onion .
each time you pull back a layer ,
there's always another
in its place .
had heart of ice ,
one I tried to unthaw .
I wiped your surface ,
and it just froze back over
immediately after .
an imperfect flaw of perfection .
someone in need of affection ,
commitment , attention and direction
you are someone
who would've died
saving me .
and that just can't be .
Dec 18, 2018
Dec 18, 2018 at 8:05 AM UTC
remembering
how we used to be
back when
I couldn't breathe
call me breathless
bc you were breathtaking
and mine .
you were like a rose .
beautiful yet dangerous
with thorns tipped w poison .
grew up through a crack in the cement ,
felt nothing but continual abandonment
and an ache
for something you know nothing about .
maybe you were more like an onion .
each time you pull back a layer ,
there's always another
in its place .
had heart of ice ,
one I tried to unthaw .
I wiped your surface ,
and it just froze back over
immediately after .
an imperfect flaw of perfection .
someone in need of affection ,
commitment , attention and direction
you are someone
who would've died
saving me .
and that just can't be .
"I like it. The first and second paragraph (stanza) make me think of my ex."-SB
