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i remember it was almost sunset and i was sitting on the passenger seat with you handling the wheel next to me and we nearly crashed into another car i could swear i never felt more alive yet terrified but when you got my hand and told me "feel my heartbeat" i placed my hand on your heart it was beating so fast but my focus was on your blue eyes this was the first time i felt something so surreal it felt like i was starring out to the sea i got so lost in the waves of your heartbeat and the shock in your eyes that i didn't realize you started holding my hand and then you kissed me and i didnt think much of it because i thought id see you again soon now i know that i should of kissed you longer
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Jun 25, 2014
Jun 25, 2014 at 9:05 PM UTC
surrealness
i remember it was almost sunset and i was sitting on the passenger seat with you handling the wheel next to me and we nearly crashed into another car i could swear i never felt more alive yet terrified but when you got my hand and told me "feel my heartbeat" i placed my hand on your heart it was beating so fast but my focus was on your blue eyes this was the first time i felt something so surreal it felt like i was starring out to the sea i got so lost in the waves of your heartbeat and the shock in your eyes that i didn't realize you started holding my hand and then you kissed me and i didnt think much of it because i thought id see you again soon now i know that i should of kissed you longer
wilteddaisy
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Jun 25, 2014
Jun 25, 2014 at 9:05 PM UTC
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