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I see you, you say nothing. No hi. No nothing. (I haven't seen you for what feels like a millennium.) You just stand there. Hello? I call to you. You respond. You walk away. I hug you, you do nothing. No return. No nothing. (I haven't given you a proper hug since that Sunday where I cried like a child.) You just stand there. Hello? I call to you. You respond. You're quiet. I touch you, you do nothing. No return. No nothing. (I haven't touched you, properly touched you, for months.) You just stand there. Hello? I call to you. You respond. You move away. I say I love you. I say I love you, so god **** much. ( I love you.) Hello? I call to you. You don't respond.
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Oct 16, 2014
Oct 16, 2014 at 1:49 AM UTC
help me out.
I see you, you say nothing. No hi. No nothing. (I haven't seen you for what feels like a millennium.) You just stand there. Hello? I call to you. You respond. You walk away. I hug you, you do nothing. No return. No nothing. (I haven't given you a proper hug since that Sunday where I cried like a child.) You just stand there. Hello? I call to you. You respond. You're quiet. I touch you, you do nothing. No return. No nothing. (I haven't touched you, properly touched you, for months.) You just stand there. Hello? I call to you. You respond. You move away. I say I love you. I say I love you, so god **** much. ( I love you.) Hello? I call to you. You don't respond.
I recall writing this one. I think I spat out seven poems that day. Rough time.
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Oct 16, 2014
Oct 16, 2014 at 1:49 AM UTC
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