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There was just something so deeply enamoring, that you could not only see it in her existence, but you can feel it in her eyes as well. That it did not matter what anyone thought, said, or believed about them. That all that it only mattered was what they had- and that was love. There were no need for words, they understood each other fluently with just one look. And with just one look, serenity soothed their soul, mind, and heart. But he- he only saw her for how she truly was: *Glorious, radiant, spectacular, and absolutely perfect* because his perception of women did not limited his sight. He, as a man, understood quite well that he had the responsibility and duty to assure his woman, to make her feel, to make her sense, that he was not just captivated, but intrigued, in her. That he was in search for the depth of her inner beauty to the point that it overwhelmed all her flaws, her insecurities, her fears, and spark this wild passion within her to want to give her entire devotion to him. That she could release her mind, body and soul. Entregarse ella misma so passionately, so eternally, to just him and only him. That she could release all that beauty that she kept hidden away. To finally let someone love her just for the way she is- as flawed as she was, as unattractive as she sometimes felt, and as unaccomplished as she thought she was. To believe that she had to hide all the parts of her that were broken, out of fear that someone else was incapable of loving what was less than perfect. How two minds became infixed with raw love and tender affection. Believing that the body if his woman was what God promised- Paradise. How it should be touched, how it should be explored with a rose; his love. Caressing her flesh as though the rose itself were the wing of an angel. He understood how his woman should be touched.
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Aug 23, 2014
Aug 23, 2014 at 12:32 PM UTC
Greatest Love Story
There was just something so deeply enamoring, that you could not only see it in her existence, but you can feel it in her eyes as well. That it did not matter what anyone thought, said, or believed about them. That all that it only mattered was what they had- and that was love. There were no need for words, they understood each other fluently with just one look. And with just one look, serenity soothed their soul, mind, and heart. But he- he only saw her for how she truly was: *Glorious, radiant, spectacular, and absolutely perfect* because his perception of women did not limited his sight. He, as a man, understood quite well that he had the responsibility and duty to assure his woman, to make her feel, to make her sense, that he was not just captivated, but intrigued, in her. That he was in search for the depth of her inner beauty to the point that it overwhelmed all her flaws, her insecurities, her fears, and spark this wild passion within her to want to give her entire devotion to him. That she could release her mind, body and soul. Entregarse ella misma so passionately, so eternally, to just him and only him. That she could release all that beauty that she kept hidden away. To finally let someone love her just for the way she is- as flawed as she was, as unattractive as she sometimes felt, and as unaccomplished as she thought she was. To believe that she had to hide all the parts of her that were broken, out of fear that someone else was incapable of loving what was less than perfect. How two minds became infixed with raw love and tender affection. Believing that the body if his woman was what God promised- Paradise. How it should be touched, how it should be explored with a rose; his love. Caressing her flesh as though the rose itself were the wing of an angel. He understood how his woman should be touched.
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Aug 23, 2014
Aug 23, 2014 at 12:32 PM UTC
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