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you were crying so much that day tears and sweat marred your face when you heard my footsteps you look up and ask 'do you love me?' boy, i can't tell you how much those drops of ache felt like a thousand beatings to the heart that have always loved you more than anyone else [even you] there is nothing to do but hold you framing your beauty in my trembling palms i kissed your eyelids hoping against all hope that that contact would be enough i spent a great deal of my life convincing you that you matter i look at you as if you are beyond this universe every waking moment was dedicated into never making you feel less than your true worth so it came as no surprise that when i ask if you love me you just smiled and said 'thank you'
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Apr 16, 2019
Apr 16, 2019 at 5:31 AM UTC
my eloquence at its finest: a response to your gratitude
you were crying so much that day tears and sweat marred your face when you heard my footsteps you look up and ask 'do you love me?' boy, i can't tell you how much those drops of ache felt like a thousand beatings to the heart that have always loved you more than anyone else [even you] there is nothing to do but hold you framing your beauty in my trembling palms i kissed your eyelids hoping against all hope that that contact would be enough i spent a great deal of my life convincing you that you matter i look at you as if you are beyond this universe every waking moment was dedicated into never making you feel less than your true worth so it came as no surprise that when i ask if you love me you just smiled and said 'thank you'
-this is too much; now i know why i felt like no value was left within -no, well maybe, yes, (you are) partially at fault **** you, dear
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17/F/Philippines
Apr 16, 2019
Apr 16, 2019 at 5:31 AM UTC
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