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I hold my breath and close my eyes As the water around me begins to rise I brace for impact, a blow which never comes Only the cold water to which I succumb Washed away by a current from my promised land I see all around me, opened hands I claw and scratch Tear and wound But my fingers just happen slip right through I sink deeper and deeper into a world a-new And the gentle whispers which slowly consume I don't want to open my eyes No no no My heart and mind tell me so The sharks circle my feet with rusted teeth I must escape so I ****** and heave I reach the surface, and bob up and down My oh my, I almost drowned
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Jul 31, 2018
Jul 31, 2018 at 1:20 AM UTC
Drowning
I hold my breath and close my eyes As the water around me begins to rise I brace for impact, a blow which never comes Only the cold water to which I succumb Washed away by a current from my promised land I see all around me, opened hands I claw and scratch Tear and wound But my fingers just happen slip right through I sink deeper and deeper into a world a-new And the gentle whispers which slowly consume I don't want to open my eyes No no no My heart and mind tell me so The sharks circle my feet with rusted teeth I must escape so I ****** and heave I reach the surface, and bob up and down My oh my, I almost drowned
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Slavyori
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15/M/Maryland
Jul 31, 2018
Jul 31, 2018 at 1:20 AM UTC
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