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On a cold November evening, she met herself Her reflection was shivering; confident, Her lips cold; her smile warm On a cold November evening, she saw herself Her eyes sparkled with humor in time with the gentle dance of the snow, Each snowflake a waltz reflecting her mood And she asked herself, how did you get here, me? How did you escape your cage? And she answered, oh darling, I never did. The cage simply outgrew me, and the iron bars scraped my arms I hurt myself no longer, but I still hurt And yet it was all worth it, to see that look in your eyes On a cold November evening, she walked away Those iron bars so far from her hopeful face - A cage so big she didn’t understand how she could ever leave And yet the phantom pain on her arms was a promise That this wasn’t forever.
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May 4, 2025
May 4, 2025 at 8:18 PM UTC
phantom pain
On a cold November evening, she met herself Her reflection was shivering; confident, Her lips cold; her smile warm On a cold November evening, she saw herself Her eyes sparkled with humor in time with the gentle dance of the snow, Each snowflake a waltz reflecting her mood And she asked herself, how did you get here, me? How did you escape your cage? And she answered, oh darling, I never did. The cage simply outgrew me, and the iron bars scraped my arms I hurt myself no longer, but I still hurt And yet it was all worth it, to see that look in your eyes On a cold November evening, she walked away Those iron bars so far from her hopeful face - A cage so big she didn’t understand how she could ever leave And yet the phantom pain on her arms was a promise That this wasn’t forever.
bluenorchid
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15/F/Los Angeles
May 4, 2025
May 4, 2025 at 8:18 PM UTC
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