She was like music,
and I longed to dance.

Her heart was the beat, 
and I begged for the chance. 

Her words were the vocals, 
and I was put in a trance.

Her smile was the melody, 
and I fell in love at first glance.

TianaMarie

She was like Music

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kaleidoscopickid

To see someone at first glance, only to have yourself fall for that person through the succession of time..ahh! this poem spoke my heart. nice ink!

TemporalFugue

I like the flow and brevity :)

Her demeanor intoxicant
begging, romance

I can't help but smiling when I read this poem manages to encapsulate how I feel when I fall in love, glad I stumbled upon this gem

musicians_of_3stars

Whenever I need inspiration, I find myself always coming back to this poem. It is very well constructed and has the ability to trace a smile across my face. Absolutely in love with it :D

kim-johanna-baker

This is beautiful Tiana, so pleased to see your write as poem of the day, warmest congratulations my friend.. well done..tyfs..kimx

Jeff-Gaines

It sings like a song ... a really well thought out piece!

christopher-victor-russon

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debbie-brindley

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semihten5

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sally-a-bayan

So cute! Becoming more,enjoyable to read as you read over and 
over.. 
Sally :))

psyched-out

IamEnigma

anthony-brady

Tiana -thank you for asking me to comment on your poem - She was like Music - Some of the best poems are short in length but long in their effect - in in that they resonate like the harmonious notes of music. You convey a fetching feminine lightness in lyrics that could be a song.  The invitation: Dance with me - I want to put my arms around you... is magnetic.

KikodinhoAlexandros

Ah, ineffably brilliant! Resplendent poem, Tiana.

mannley-collins

Strings of meaningless associated but fine sounding words

eleanor-prince

gorgeous! love the simplicity here and lilting melody throughout... beautiful ode to the chemistry of love

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Youssef

It's a great poem. I loved the idea, and enjoyed every word of it.

Mugerwa_Muzamil

Piquant piece, love how it flows. The sweetness of brevity.

reetam-bhattacharya

Very well written. I loved the rhythm and the meaning...

blancheboucher

I am so in love with this poem. So beautifully written. I n c r e d i b l e.

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star-bg

Nicely done! Inspiring!
Her being a gift
scribed inside the stars.

LoriJonesMcCaffery

Even your name is musical.  How could your verse not be. Both meant to be said/read out loud.

ummi

salmabanu-hatim

brooklyn6timesplus

terry-jordan

patricia-leduc

Lovely ! I enjoyed reading and feeling your words :))

pradeep

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lopeta

desi_glenn

This was literally so beautiful. I can't stop smiling

photodude

she was or is... I wonder how the story continues... thanks for the inspiration.

anwarghanij

theresa-hartley-mace

Dani_alex

You&#8217;ve got a gift&#8212;this is proof.

This hit way deeper than I expected&#8212;beautifully done

novacalloway011

This is short, sweet, and hits right in the feels. The rhythm flows like a song so fitting for the theme. Loved the emotion packed in just a few lines.

Moonlight_Sparkle

it made me skip beat, it made for me hard to breath

mysterie

i think this holds a beauty you can't explain

Nevaehburgess

I Love this,I get the same feelings sometimes and to find people that I relate to,it&#8217;s really cool

StarryDreamcatcher

I just realized I heard music and saw a couple dance in the moonlight in the backdrop while reading this amazing piece!

noneim

**Vocals in the Night**  
Her kisses are quieter  
A dance in the rain  
And I wonder&#8212;  
Love  
Or just a question mark  
With a giant **?**

rose1961

Maryhuxley

This type of poems make me smile &#128522; 
You can feel the love through the poem

aminahaaleem

&#8220;she is my muse&#8221;. this poem was almost rhythmic i love it <3

weeping-willow

coleman-m-lowe

I loe this poem so elegant in it's simplicity. It say's so much, and speaks to my heart. Stunning and wonderful. Makes me feel young and ready to fall in love all over again. Keep up the good work.

Confessionsofaggression

JulieSmith

Talon

I absolutely love this. Simple yet hits you deeply. I love that it made me reread it.

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yourlocalstaradmirer

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eternalstarlight

This is absolutely beautiful. Im in love with this poem

Toyatheruthless

This poem is great and accurately describes the feeling I have towards a certain someone. Keep up the good work!

the-girl-with-the-eyes-on-fire

reneecabral

Its simple to the point and very good. I love this poem

annisalwiyansyah

Poetria

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Awesome poem!!! Loved it. It has become my favourite poem in just one read...

Aglassballoon

The flow is splendid and left me wanting more. Beautifully written!

Stace

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Absolutely beautiful! I love how you compare a lover to music. Really nice poem. Keep writing, keep growing!

Parzival

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IanGKennedy

Thank you for rhyming!

1. Now add in some padding words to improve your rhythm: e.g.,
"She was like good music"
"and I do love to dance"

2. Delete some words to improve your rhythm: e.g.,
"and I caught in a trance."

3. Substitute some words to improve your rhythm: e.g.,
"I loved her at first glance."

alan-4

Eumolpus

There is a difference between poetry and lyrics like there is between an oil painting and charcoal. You have written a very good song, it serves all the needs of song, but few of depth of true poetry.  I agree with Paul McCartney there's nothing wrong with 
"silly little love songs"  Put it to music.

andrew-guzaldo-c

I LOVED this so MUCH< I shared it with the SHE that makes me feel this way<<< AWESOME

rahamaaa

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james-falkener

Really nice. I read it as written first and then on my second read I omitted the word 'and' on the second line of each verse.  Both ways are really good.  Nice rhyming.

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OrangeOranges008

This poem is beautiful with a good rhyme scheme

removed.-c5kg

Excellent poem Tina, I could really envision it!

Passerby

Silverlighting

VERONICAH

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PaganPaul

Belated congratulations on getting daily poem :)
PPx

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deovrat

I loved it. It's amazing. I love the ideas and images you used, especially in the first two stanzas. Of course l follow you, and hope to be always in close touch. Thank you.

reality

A very mundane while romantic poem, brava; thanx for the excellent write.   reality

sukhman-2

Perfectly  expresses the feeling of having a first crush

madison-rene

I think that the rhymes were a little on the forced side of things, but if I just read the poem and ignored the overthinking and over analyzing part of my brain, this became a sweet, heartwarming piece that I'm glad I ran into. Thank you for penning.

tulipfever

i loVE tHIs oso mUCHHHHHh!1!1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!