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Why I am so Beat Something about...the road, old shoes and sore feet, motorcycles and wine, greasy diners and last dimes, half a stale Hoagie left to eat. Man, that's why I am so Beat. Headed out west from town to town. Dry-rot houses, faded signs, Pioneers in rags, so behind the times. This dead world keeps puttin’ me in a funk, Pal, that’s why I’d rather just stay drunk. Girls and boys in every bar, From Kansas to Colorado, Hit me up for drinks and manila tar, Trying sadly to feel what I do, Man it’s hard; That’s why I feel so scarred. I came out west to find my soul And saw emptiness instead. Don’t ask me where I’m heading next, Cause I don’t know. I’m friggin hexed. All I know is drive & drink & sleep; Man, you know That’s why I am so beat. August 3, 2018
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Aug 3, 2018
Aug 3, 2018 at 10:52 AM UTC
Why I am so beat
Why I am so Beat Something about...the road, old shoes and sore feet, motorcycles and wine, greasy diners and last dimes, half a stale Hoagie left to eat. Man, that's why I am so Beat. Headed out west from town to town. Dry-rot houses, faded signs, Pioneers in rags, so behind the times. This dead world keeps puttin’ me in a funk, Pal, that’s why I’d rather just stay drunk. Girls and boys in every bar, From Kansas to Colorado, Hit me up for drinks and manila tar, Trying sadly to feel what I do, Man it’s hard; That’s why I feel so scarred. I came out west to find my soul And saw emptiness instead. Don’t ask me where I’m heading next, Cause I don’t know. I’m friggin hexed. All I know is drive & drink & sleep; Man, you know That’s why I am so beat. August 3, 2018
Inspired by a 50's series of pulp novels, Why I am So Beat Nolan Miller. I wanted to capture the same disillusion felt by Beat poets or travelers that the Hippies later felt.
sharon-talbot
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Massachusetts, USA
Aug 3, 2018
Aug 3, 2018 at 10:52 AM UTC
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