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A shard of vintage hope Stained with no scope Painted for an antique emotion Which was drowning in a deep ocean Woefully against all of my notion On the edge of a chasmic cliff A forlorn shade of my soul, stands stiff-- She stares down in the fathomless abyss Not fearing the abysmal crisis In which, she will plunge in a gorge of vices Flames dance and flicker towards her heart And, breaking the iron-wrought cage apart Alas! To only find a ghastly grim cavern Engirdled between lungs and ribs, Her once-alive heart--was torn to shreds All whilst, a monster gently caressed Towards the harrowing path of an eternal rest
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Aug 26, 2024
Aug 26, 2024 at 9:56 AM UTC
An Estranged Emotion
A shard of vintage hope Stained with no scope Painted for an antique emotion Which was drowning in a deep ocean Woefully against all of my notion On the edge of a chasmic cliff A forlorn shade of my soul, stands stiff-- She stares down in the fathomless abyss Not fearing the abysmal crisis In which, she will plunge in a gorge of vices Flames dance and flicker towards her heart And, breaking the iron-wrought cage apart Alas! To only find a ghastly grim cavern Engirdled between lungs and ribs, Her once-alive heart--was torn to shreds All whilst, a monster gently caressed Towards the harrowing path of an eternal rest
I wrote this poem after a friend of mine had came out as aromantic. The speaker had once fallen in love but betrayal had hit her so hard that the feeling of love was taken away from her--with her first love.
Ashlyn_Ray
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16/F/India
Aug 26, 2024
Aug 26, 2024 at 9:56 AM UTC
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